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Hi , it's Marie-Noelle again. I've deleted my first bash (too ashamed of it!), and done a new one, see:

Here's my second efforthttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sV7mvFLX9TQ

Martin's comments - I liked these, MN, - they are the right sort of length, and you can see even by attempt two, you are getting more sophisticated in the visual style. I think these kind of 'mini thoughts' are what YouTube is ideal for, so it's interesting that you've settled on this, and not longer, discursive pieces. I liked the music too, the audio in the underground was noisy, so the music offset this. It might be worth ending each piece with a credits page which lists the music (and I notice you already put your blog address in, this is good practice, I didn't do this for ages, and lost out on good blog traffic!).

Good stuff, thanks for sharing, I'd be interested in hearing your thoughts on the process.